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 Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"

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PipeDragon

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Location : South Jersey
Registration date : 2012-10-31

PostSubject: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:12 am

HI Brothers,

I wasnt sure if this was the 'right" thread to post these but it seemed the best so..

Anyway, here are a couple poems I wrote last night/early this morning. I havent really written anything in a while but they kinda "popped" into my head (as they usually do/did back in the day) and I decided to share.

Here they are:

Different Shades Of Smoke

Cured leaf thoughts
rise from the mind
of my coloring Meer.

Leaving traces
of their existence

lingering

On the invisible
currents
of Life's
breath.


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Ghost Warden

Keys and pipe
worn by years of
use and purpose,

sit beside their keeper
on a
time
stained
table.

Waiting for a hand

That will never
call on them
again.
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williamcharles

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Location : Indiana
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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Sun Nov 18, 2012 3:06 pm

Ghost Warden really makes you think, remember, miss.....good job
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Kyle Weiss

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Location : Reno, NV
Registration date : 2011-09-18

PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Sun Nov 18, 2012 3:08 pm

Pipes tend to get the brain working as it was designed to do in the individual. Don't ever be too shy to share.

I'm no poetry fan/critic, but it obviously meant something to ya--that matters.

Cool
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PipeDragon

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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Mon Nov 19, 2012 9:20 pm

Thanks brothers..

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danindayton

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Location : Dayton, Oh
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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Wed Nov 21, 2012 9:06 am

Pipe Warden hit an empty spot in my heart. I liked it a lot.
As a sometime writer, My words are just that, my words and are very personal. When done right, others find them personal too.

danindayton
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PipeDragon

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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Thu Nov 22, 2012 8:29 am

danindayton wrote:
Pipe Warden hit an empty spot in my heart. I liked it a lot.
As a sometime writer, My words are just that, my words and are very personal. When done right, others find them personal too.

danindayton

Thank you brother

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sand18f

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Age : 67
Location : Southern Appalachia
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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Fri Nov 23, 2012 1:45 am

Why can't I do that? Very nice! cheers cheers cheers

Bill

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danindayton

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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Fri Nov 23, 2012 12:52 pm

Just write whats in your heart. There is no way that it can be wrong.

danindayton
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George Kaplan

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Location : Kalamazoo, MI
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PostSubject: Re: Some Poems I Wrote "Different Shades Of Smoke/Ghost Warden"    Sat Nov 24, 2012 12:28 am

Good stuff, Mr. Dragon.
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