- Feb 10, 2009
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Thank you brother : )
Sorry to hear that you've been ill. I have been sick for about two months now, and it's been one long miserable episode. Getting out of the house for the weekend and playing some music really helped. Hope you're feeling better soon.PipedJimmy":r7vxwcsl said:You're very, very welcome brother : ) sorry it's taken me time to reply, I've been a little ill recently, long live the good times though eh?
Just a rough cold and flu season. I shouldn't complain though, at least it's warm here. I've been through one English winter (years ago) and I don't think I'd fare too well...PipedJimmy":j3ia62i0 said:You too brother, whatever it is you've got, I hope it passes quickly
I like this, and I really like the line above. Emotions are so intense when felt in youth.PipedJimmy":fiw1u751 said:...embody those roles old men have written of, from fond memories of being their younger selves.
Ouch!!PipedJimmy":jpk9oeqf said:Hmm this on's a little darker....
You say you love me still…but your lips they hide a lie, for there's a trembling in my heart that no false words can belie.
I stand here legs quivering, almost on bended knee, my body ready for breaking, no belief can set it free. I feel that sense of choking, as breath tightens in my chest, that if my heart gives up in hoping, there is no life left for the rest
I beg you now, I mean it, do not let this truth turn real! but ever hide it in your mind, place it under guarded seal, and I'll just keep pretending, just like the happy fool, blinded to what the truth is, for verity’s what’s cruel.
You feel so sorry for me, you’re so sorry it can’t be me, all these words I read as your lips speak as they move untruthfully. You sensed my love and took it, though I was still unsure, and now you look upon me like a child you can't ignore, a loathsome little creature with no light left in its life, it would be more merciful wouldn’t it to brandish symbolic knife.
I've picked up your taste for loathing and I’ve clutched it to my breast, for if you hate me truly I'll come in a second-best ,but I'm lying now you see it, as I do sink on bended knee, I beg you please, I beg you, don't ever set me free
:study: Hey Jimmy, more great stuff! Do you plan on writing a book, or putting a collection together, or maybe you've already done so?PipedJimmy":ku4h0rex said:Death grasped me by the shoulder, with a grip felt cool yet firm, I can't deny I was tempted by those comforts of his terms... though in surprise to that sunken face, I coolly shook my head.