I like what you were going for on that one. The shape is elegant and proportional, and probably a slight edit (as was mentioned by Cygnus) of the band would up the style-points a bit. The metal on the band looks quite thin, and it might have stretched and warped a bit. Bands often seem to be quite thick on most pipes, sometimes even integral pieces of the shank (like extensions) and that's probably the reason why.
There's some really great attempts at carving coming out of the...woodwork, so to speak...around here lately. 8)